Hahaha!
Despite the lazy and uninspired animation, this cartoon r0x0rs my s0x0rs!!111!! Great story, hilarious jokes, and a real swift pace. I thought this thing was excellent! 5/5!
Hahaha!
Despite the lazy and uninspired animation, this cartoon r0x0rs my s0x0rs!!111!! Great story, hilarious jokes, and a real swift pace. I thought this thing was excellent! 5/5!
Thank you, good to see that some people are getting the message. (Poor animation that's neutralized with an original story.)
Thanks again, take care.
Sooo Much Better!
Dude, awesome imrovements. I'm so glad you resubmitted, because Lime in the Coconut is hehehelarious. This one is 10x better.
Moving!
Really great job. The characters are drawn really well and you captured the feeling of the song perfectly. I'm amazed and moved! 5/5.
Eh...
Typical stick movie. The cars were cool though. You stole the joke from Chapelle.
lol, it was a great joke man
Funny Random Shit
I thought this was really funny and had some great animation in it. I laughed out loud when the dude shot the wall. Also, great pacing.
Thanks man , lol yeah with that i came up one houre ago lol .
thx for the great review :D
Cool Start - Could use a bit of Polishing
Awesome! Good character design and animation! I think to take it to the next level (a 5 out of 5 rather than 4 out of 5 I gave you) is to add small touches, like shading to your characters, give it music, and a better ending and it could be front page. It just kind of.....
Stops.
Thanks for the comments. I agree this could definitely be improved. Music would help, but it's so hard to find royalty-free cartoony music. I prefer not using copyrighted material.
Good Animation with Some Small Problems
The dialogue was funny but could be funnier. The only problems I had were the endless loop and the fact that it took me a long time to actually find the play button - but maybe I'm a moron.
The animation, by the way, was f'kin awesome!
Thanks! Can't anything!? I knew these problems going ing... but it was done to be done with and submitted. Thanks for the support. I'll let you know when I post something better.
Too Short
The characters are drawn really well. Awesome work on them.
The biggest problem I had was that I couldn't read any of the text... It went by to fast.
And the rest of the movie was too short. If this one does get blammed (hopefully it won't), you should consider these changes.
The Internet has bastardized the English language!!!
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